Dear Professor XX,尊敬的XX教授:
这是我申请读写相关课程的信。我是一个负责任的积极的人。因此,我想提交我的材料,包括研究报告、综合文章、说服性文章、数据评论、课堂上的文章和修订的文章,以及与活动相关的三张图片。
This is my application letter for related reading and writing classes. I am a responsible and positive person. So I would like to submit my materials including a research report, synthesized article, persuasive essay, data commentary, in-class essay and revised one, and three pictures related to activities.
我的报告旨在查明股市是否对谣言反应过度。它告诉我新闻会影响股票价格和市场,但它实践了我的阅读理解能力。在谈到作业时,我只想说,这给了我一个写专业报告的提示,并且通过收集信息提高了我的阅读技能,这真的很令人兴奋。My report aims to find out whether the stock market is overreacted on rumors. It tells that news would influence on the stock price and market, but it practiced my ability of reading comprehension. When talking about assignment, I just want to mention that that gave me a hint to write a professional report, and that improved my reading skills by collecting information, which is really exciting.
这篇有说服力的文章是关于告密的。写这篇文章的时候,我学会了辩证思维。这并不意味着所有的建议都值得尊重。然而,我通过你的准确评论纠正了许多语法和格式问题,这对我有很大帮助。以上两个因素导致新闻失真。在此过程中,我在归纳和分析能力方面取得了很大的进步,这有助于我比较观点,撰写研究报告。除此之外,我意识到我缺乏解释的表达技巧。我还有一些语法问题。然而,我终于在这些任务上取得了很大的进展。
The persuasive essay is talking about whistle blowing. When writing this one, I learned the dialectical thought. It does not mean all recommendations are worth of being esteemed. However, I corrected many grammatical and format problems by your precise comments, which helped me a lot. The above two factors leading to the distortion of the news. During the process, I have made a great progress on inducing and analyzing ability, which helped me to compare the perspectives and to write study report. Except that, I realized that I am lack of presenting skills for explaining. And I still had some grammatical problems. However, I have made great strides over those assignments finally.
我的阅读理解能力在短期内有所提高,因为我大部分时间都花在了重写和修改上。
My reading comprehension ability has improved in a short term because I spent most of my time on rewriting and revising.
我在英语写作课上努力学习了三次,所以我希望你能给我一个通过的机会。事实上,我的GMAT成绩是510分,所以,如果你帮我一个忙,我会在今年春天进入UD。感谢您的关注和支持,我将不负众望。如果您能通过我的电子邮件地址给我一些建议,我将不胜感激:[email protected])
I have worked hard and studied the course for three times on English writing class, so I want you to give me a chance to pass it. In fact, I have got 510 score of GMAT, therefore, if you do me a favor, I will get in UD this spring. Thank you for your attention and support and I will live up to your expectation. It would be appreciated if you give me some suggestions via my Email address: [email protected])
Sincerely真诚地 XXX |