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动机信也是留学文书中的一种，主要是介绍申请者的申请动机、学业和职业规划、相关背景。其实在写作内容上，动机信与个人陈述有一定的类似点，其差别在于，动机信是主动说明申请动机，说明自身与专业的契合点，而个人陈述则重点讲述个人经历，由招生官判断是否适合这个专业。部分英国的院校可能只要求写其中一篇，则可以将二者的特点结合起来，阐述清楚你的申请动机、职业规划和相关背景。写作的过程中不要泛泛而谈，最好有具体事例，但要注意不要编造事件，也不要抄袭别人的东西，最基本原则就是做真我。下面就谈谈动机信是怎么应该怎样写。 一、英国动机信的写作要点 1.为何我要去英国留学 这个目录的分支下需要写的是，英国留学的优势以及你去英国学习的目的，比如说英国教育水平很高，气候宜人，环境优美，是个学习的好地方。在英国能够学习到先进的思想和理念。英国有很多在世界上名列前茅的大学，比如牛津大学、比如剑桥大学，比如比如位于英格兰的南部的南安普顿大学，比如拥有极其丰富的教学资源的卡迪夫大学…… 2.申请人回国之后的打算 那可以写我学的是会计，回国之后打算做一名会计，某某亲人朋友在某某会计师务所的律师，他从事会计这一行很多年了，经验颇丰，虽然他目前的年薪不低，但是他计划在不久的将来成立一个自己的会计师事务所，他希望我出国学成后能和他一起工作。 3.明确写明自己留学经费的来源 这一点是非常非常重要的，在申请留学签证的时候，我们已经多次强调过资金对于出国留学的重要性。所以这一点你可以写自己父母的职位、自己家族的产业等等。比如写自己的父亲是某某公司的总经理，在早年的时候也去某国留过学，所以希望我能出去开阔眼界，增加见识。所以他很支持我出国留学，愿意资助我在留学期间的一切费用。 二、动机信的主要写作内容 动机信的内容主要包括以下三个部分： 1.个人基本情况：与个人简历不同，这里的个人基本情况是要着重表述个人的学习和工作期间的主要业绩。 2.申请原因：明确阐述申请某某学校以及某某专业的理由，要告诉校方这个学校为什么吸引你，学习这个专业对你有什么帮助。 3.未来职业构想：具体说明在毕业之后，你准备从事的工作。切忌使用贡献、奉献、报效之类空洞的词汇，而应该表明去什么企业、公司，在什么职位上负责什么工作，并且最好把预期的年薪也写出来。也许很多学生会说：以后的事情现在怎么能知道?其实，学校就是想了解你是否有明确的求学目的，并允许学生有根据、符合逻辑的设想。 另外，在申请高等商学院的时候，学校还会特意让学生谈谈自己的优缺点和性格特征。 三、精选动机信范文： Faculty of Electromechanical Engineering Guangdong University of Technology No. 100 Waihuan Xi Road Guangzhou Higher Education Mega Centre Panyu District Guangzhou 510006 China Dear Sir or_ Madam, I appreciate that you can take time off your busy schedule to read my letter. This is a letter of my motivation to apply for the Master degree of Precision Manufacturing （MPM） at The University of Applied Sciences and Arts of Southern Switzerland （SUPSI）. First, allow me to introduce myself. My name is XXX. I’m a first grade postgraduate of Guangdong University of Technology （GDUT）. My major is Mechanical Engineering and Automation. I get my bachelor degree in Mechanical Engineering and Automation at Wuhan University of Technology on 7th July 2011. After I graduated from my university, I worked in Jiangling Automobile Joint-stock Company for about 1 year. Then I took the Postgraduate Entrance Examination and was enrolled at GDUT at last. There are some hearty reasons why I like SUPSI and the major of MPM. Firstly, I am interested in MPM, for I have been studying in Mechanical Engineering and Automation since I started my university life. It’s well known that this major plays a foundational role of the developing of industry and it is easy for us to find a job. MPM, in my opinion, is a similar major with Mechanical Engineering and Automation. Exactly speaking, it’s the specialization and concretion of Mechanical Engineering and Automation. MPM in SUPSI based on a set of prominent and well balanced lectures that not only promote individual professional skills and cultivate their ability but also their creativity, management level and shape attitude. I think I can get more professional knowledge than I can get in land and extend my knowledge fields to enhance my competitive strength. Secondly, SUPSI can offer me good teaching quality. SUPSI is one of the eight universities of Applied Sciences in Switzerland. The university focuses on education based on professional need and on applied research, and at the same time, it provides a practice-oriented education and offers a wide range of master’s programs. The educational goad of MPM at SUPSI is to shape new professional figures characterized by research and operate skills through an effective training path constantly merging research and education. For my part, I prefer practice-oriented education to pure research-oriented. Thirdly, SUPSI can afford me a good environment to study. According to Global Competitiveness Report 2009-2010, Switzerland ranked number one among a total of 131 surveyed countries. It’s a reflection of a world-class capacity for innovation, combined with a highly sophisticated business culture. The country has a well-developed infrastructure for scientific research, with close collaboration between the leading research centers and industries. What’s more, the top-notch infrastructure, well-built education and health care systems as well as clean and beautiful environment all provide a safe, convenient, comfortable and healthy living environment for me to live and study. Additionally, SUPSI gives a preferential tuition fee. The institution cooperates with our university. Due to cooperation between the Chinese and Swiss governments on this project, the fees are low. I think choosing to study at SUPSI can lower the financial pressure to my family. Furthermore, after graduating from SUPSI, I will become more competitive and enjoy a more positive prospect in future job market. Finally, thank you for your reading again. I am seriously interested in studying at your university. What I care most is, whether I can be accepted by you, I wish! #p#分页标题#e# Looking forward to hearing from you and with best regards to you. Yours faithfully, XXX |
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