I shall begin with my qualifications. I have a very good academic background in that I hold 9 GCSEs at grades A-C and 3 A-Levels in English Language (A), Physics (B) and Mathematics (B). As mentioned in my opening paragraph, I am a graduate from the University of Bristol and I hold a 1:0 BEng in Civil Engineering. I believe My name is Roma McKenzie, a Civil Engineering graduate with a great deal of experience. I am now seeking a place on the Masters course in Civil Engineering at the University of Bristol in order to further my qualifications and to achieve my desired career goals. I possess many good qualities which I will endeavour to lay out so that you can get a picture of me as a student and as a person. 我的名字是罗马的麦肯齐,土木工程专业毕业。我现在布里斯托大学寻求土木工程硕士课程为了进一步促进我的资历和实现我的理想的职业目标。我有许多作为一名学生和一个人应该拥有的好的品质。 that this qualification demonstrates my competence at studying this subject. I found the course incredibly interesting and it reaffirmed my belief that I have chosen the right course to study. As such, I wish to continue my studies in Civil Engineering in order to expand my knowledge on the subject. As you can see from my qualifications, I am an extremely hard-working, studious and motivated individual. I am sure this trait will continue enabling me to gain maximum benefit from this further study and to gain a greater knowledge of this subject. Therefore, as you can see, I have a great deal of experience within the field of Civil Engineering. Furthermore, I am very enthusiastic about this topic and have a keen interest in reading around the subject. I have read above and beyond my previous course material in order to ensure that I have a holistic, wide breadth of knowledge on this subject. 我将从我所获得资质开始阐述。我有一个很好的学术背景,我持有9个英语语言类普通中等教育证书A到C3个等级,(一),物理(B)和数学(B)。我开篇提到的,我从布里斯托大学毕业,我持有1土木工程学学士。我相信这个资格证明我的能力在学习这门学科。我发现这些课程非常有趣,它重申了我的信仰,我的选择是正确的过程研究。因此,我希望继续我的研究在土木工程为主体扩大我的知识。你可以看到我的资历,我是一个十分勤奋,好学上进的个体。我确信这个特质将继续使我能够从中获得最大的利益和进一步的研究,以获得更大的对这个问题的认识。因此,你可以看到,我的土木工程领域内有大量的经验。另外,我对这个话题很热情,在主题阅读的兴趣。我已阅读超越我以前的课程材料,以确保我有一个全面的,广泛的对这一学科的知识。 Whilst studying at the University of Bristol for my degree, I appreciated the teaching methods, the course material and the staff, which makes me very keen to return to your institution. The University of Bristol is an excellent educational establishment for Civil Engineering and it is for this reason also that I wish to continue my studies with the university that I graduated from. On a similar note, I completed a summer placement for a large Civil Engineering firm, which has given me further experience in this field and has helped me to better understand the material that I have been taught in a real world setting. I found the placement very exciting as well as interesting. In addition, I believe that working on the summer placement has given me a greater scope of knowledge of what it will be like in the workplace and I was able to use the knowledge that I have been taught at university to my advantage in order to stand out at the firm. As with my studies, the summer placement really confirmed my belief that this is definitely the area in which I wish to devote my attentions to both in my academic career and my future employment. I hope that this confirms to you that I can operate efficiently outside of the learning environment and that I am willing to take on challenges and different experiences in order to further my education and career. I am a very eager student, who is more than willing to ask questions if I do not understand a topic. I am not scared of hard work or difficult questions, as it offers me chance to demonstrate to you the range of my skills and understanding whilst also improving my knowledge and abilities past undergraduate to a more prestigious and specialised level. Hence, I can honestly say that my desire to be accepted upon this Masters course is a combination of two main factors. Firstly, it is partly due to my interest into the subject area and secondly, partly down to my desire to gain a higher qualification. I hope this will enable me to stand out above candidates with just a degree to future employers as I wish to enter into a position that I take both an interest in but also have the skills and qualifications to fulfil the role properly and efficiently. In closing, I trust that I have demonstrated to you my academic expertise that I have in this field and the keen interest that I take in Civil Engineering. I hope it is now clear to see that I am very passionate about this topic and certainly qualified for a place on the Masters Civil Engineering course at the University of Bristol. |