美国大学申请:US college application

尊敬的先生：

我在写大学申请书，希望能被你们学校录取。我为你的学校饿了这么久，做了这么多的梦，以至于我走进了米斯/密歇根大学-安阿伯/南加州大学的大门。

Dear Sir:

 I am writing the college application with the expectation to be admitted into your school.  I, starving for your school so long time, have dreamed so many times that I am stepping into the gate of Rice / University of Michigan--Ann Arbor / University of Southern California.

我叫XX，今年18岁。我是一名高中生，就读于香港的斯蒂芬女子学院。我的高中平均GPA是3，平均B，占全班50%。在学校，我上科学、物理、化学、生物学和数学等课程。所有这些都是我最喜欢的主题，充满了逻辑性和挑战性。另外，最吸引我的是游泳和大提琴，这使我对生活保持乐观和积极的态度。而且，我总是追求我想要的。幸运的是，从2013年到2018年，我被任命为圣斯蒂芬斯女子学院游泳队队长。同时，我参加了圣斯蒂芬斯女子学院管弦乐队大提琴第一主席。

My name is  XX,  Bohwen  and I am 18 years old. I am a senior high school student who is attending High school named Stephen's Girls College in HongKong. I have got average high school GPA of 3, average B,which occupies 50 percentile in the class. At school, I take the classes like Science, Physics, Chemistry, Biology and Math. All of these are my favorite subjects, which are brimming with logicality and challenge. Additionally, that the most thing attracts me is swimming and cello, which renders me maintain an emotion of optimistic and positive attitude towards life. Also, I always pursue what I want. Fortunately, I was assigned as the St. Stephens' Girls College Swimming Team Captain from 2013 to 2018. Meantime, I attended the St. Stephens' Girls College Orchestra Cello First Chair.

我一直坚持在这所学校申请医学工程生物医学专业是有原因的。
There are some reasons why I always insist on applying the major of Biomedical of Medical engineering in this school.

首先，我参加过很多课外活动。2016年暑假，我参加了第24届香港青年领袖联合会领导计划。2017年夏天，我还参加了加拿大多伦多哈弗格学院的学生交流项目。此外，我还参加了香港社会福利署和药房署的义工工作。在此基础上，我愿意选择这个专业。

In the first place, I have ever attended plenty of extracurricular activities. I participated in leadership program of 24th HongKong Union for Young Leaders in summer in 2016. In summer of 2017, I also joined the student exchange program of Havergal college in Toronto, Canada. Also, I took part in HongKong Social Welfare Dept and Pharmacy Dept as a volunteer worker. On the foundation of these, I am willing to choose this major indeed.

第二，我有两年的暑期志愿者计划，这让我了解了关于医学的动向。而且，我阿姨是个医生。我奶奶是护士，我父亲是生物医学工程专业的。在他们的影响下，我真的想利用这个机会实现我成为一名医学化学家的梦想。此外，我对健康科学很感兴趣。所有暑期志愿者工作都与医院病人支持小组有关。寻找那些需要持续帮助的病人，我非常有兴趣找到新的治疗方法，尤其是癌症。

In the second place, I have 2 years summer volunteer program, which allowed me to know move about medicine. What's more,my auntie is a doctor. My grandma is a nurse, my father is in biomedical engineering field. Under the effect of them, I really want to take advantage of that to achieve my dream of being a medical chemist. Furthermore, I am strongly interested in Health Science. All Summer volunteer work is related to hospital patient support group. Looking for sick people who needs help continually, I am so interested in finding new treatment method especially on cancer.

第三，尤其是，我将始终坚持医学领域，并自愿为此作出贡献。此外，当我获得了足够的知识和成就时，我的每一个病人都会得到仔细的治疗，这将是我的第一选择。我会给他们带来最好和最有效的医疗方法。

总之，我为什么要坚持申请贵校的这个专业，是因为我一直对医学工程抱有雄心壮志。我真诚地期待你的答复。
In the third place,particularly, I will always adhere to the medical field and contribute my effort to it willingly. In addition, when I have gained some ample knowledge and accomplishment,It will be ny first choice that my every patient will be treated carefully. I will bring the best and the most efficient medical methods to them.

 All in all,Why I want to apply this major of your university insistantly is that I always bear the ambition for the medical engineering. I am looking forward to your reply sincerely.