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对于很多留学生而言，留学essay是一件极为头疼的事情，很多留学生在写留学essay，特别是留学essay conclusion的时候，着实伤透了脑筋。
他们不知道怎么写essay的conclusion才能使这篇留学essay的针对性更强，他们不知道从何入手才能让这篇留学essay的观点更明确，留学essay从这个角度与中文是一样的，只有将introduction与conclusion达到完美的对应统一，才可以说是一篇优秀的留学essay。
留学essay，重要的就是能够自圆其说，知道如何写introduction，知道如何写conclusion，知道如何将introduction与conclusion相对应，这是每个留学生需要考虑的问题。
conclusion，可以说是introduction的mirror image(还原投射)，在essay的introduction部分，我们需要申论essay的thesis，在essay的conclusion部分，我们需要重申我们所提出的thesis。也就是说，essay introduction是缩影，从宽泛到详细，essay conclusion与之相反，从详细到宽泛。
如果大家不明白，可以看看以下几个例子。
e.g. 1 在住家附近盖商业广场——essay topic。
It has been announced that a large shopping center may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
Against 持反对意见的一种写法
essay introduction：
Construction of a large shopping center will do more harm than good to our neighborhood. While some neighbors welcome the news in execitement over the forthcoming progress, others like me are against the plan for nostalgic reason. The choice is up to the majority of residents. We either stop the proposed mall from being built, or lose forever the only playground we have left.
[The body in paragraph A and paragraph B.]{中体两段}
conclusion：
In spite of all possible economic benefits a large shopping center can promise to deliver, there is no substitute for the old lifestyle cherished so fondly by families in the community. We have little to gain from an undesirable monster building that is likely to affect our environment. We had better keep our neighborhood as we remember it and not as it may become. If only for nostalgic reason, we hate to miss the merry sight and sound of children having a good time in the playground.
Support 持赞成的意见
essay introduction:
Our old neighborhood can get a face-lift if the proposed mall is to be constructed. Probably for nostalgic reason, some older neighbors prefer to turn a deaf ear to the announcement, but many welcome the news as too good to be true. We have been expecting that kind of progress to come near us, even at the expense of tranquility in lifestyle. The choice is now up to the residents. We either support building the mall, or lose our only chance to reactivate our community.
[The body paragraphs A and B that are sub-focused to support the thesis.]{中体两段}
conclusion：
It may become clear that we cannot win a better economic future with a neighborhood of the past. In fact, if the construction happens, we have much to gain and little to lose other than perhaps a sense of nostalgia. That some residents are used to old lifestyles as if living in the countryside is understandable. For these sentimental neighbors, the consolation is that they can continue living in the same neighborhood as remembered as well as enjoying the new and dynamic neighborhood it may become.
e.g.2 方便快餐——essay topic
Fast food is developing more and more popular . It replaces other traditional food. Some people think it is good while some people disagree with it. What is your opinion about it? Give reasons.
A balanced diet or eating balanced meals is the key to a healthy life. Do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Example introduction and conclusion.
essay introduction：
These days, the way people eat has changed to some extent the way they live. The new eating habits are far from eating well and staying fit. The problem seems to be increasing dependence on fast food rather than balanced meals. Instead of seeking a healthy life, quite a few consumers of ready-to-eat food are getting fat and lazy.
中体两段:
Body paragraph B about people getting lazy.
conclusion：
Overweight and laziness are no doubt related to people eating badly without paying attention to a balanced diet. Probably, the solution could be found in the menu of more traditional food. Refraining from eating too much fast food too often may therefore be an effective way to a healthy life. Of course, people eat whatever to live, but to stay fit, fast food should not be the first choice. |
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