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优点：1）选题方面比较贴近生活容易引起共鸣。
2）第二段在介绍小屋内部结构的时候采用对比的手法，先写了一些小屋的种种不足之处，然后又写了“我”仍然爱着我的小屋，更显出作者对小屋的怀念与热爱。
3）结尾一句“有的东西不应该随着成长消失”意味深长，给读者留下了思考了一定的空间

缺点：1）首先就是结构上有一些混乱，没有把握住在哪一段应该介绍哪些内容，所以导致第四段的出现显得没头没尾。
2）主题不明确，一篇出色的ESSAY总是能从小事中悟出一些道理或者学到一些东西。但是本篇论文写的虽然也是一些小事，但是季结尾有些模糊，主题到底是对自然生命的热爱？童年的纯真？还是对避风港的怀念？应该选一个自己要着重表达的主题来一个“点题”的动作，这样论文就会有让人眼前一亮的效果。
[Prompt: Evaluate a significant experience, achievement, risk you have taken, or ethical dilemma you have faced and its impact on you.]
"You may now alight,” boomed a loud voice over the ferry's intercom. Walking off of the ferry, I looked around in awe at the countless unfamiliar faces that shared a common fate: Basic Military Training Camp with the Singapore army. When I was younger, I had often laughed when my older friends departed for their three-month training. I quickly realized, however, that the first three months of my two-year national service would be no laughing matter.
With my first steps onto the sunny island of Pulau Tekong -- my new home -- I thought of Tony Blair's famous declaration: "It is the dawn of a new era." Apprehension overwhelmed me as I considered that my own life was about to take a drastic turn. Determined to make the most of the situation, I followed my orders to report to the auditorium, where I officially enlisted in the army.
My assignment placed me in Charlie Company, which was renowned for having the toughest training of all the companies in the island's two camps. Yet the first two weeks were not as horrible as I had envisioned. I spent my days doing foot drills and strength-building exercises, signing documents, and speaking with insurance representatives. In those first calm days, I frequently wondered why I had worried so much about basic training. I quickly discovered why.
Within another week, I was "falling in" at three in the morning, doing a hundred push-ups in the mud, spending hours practicing drills in the scorching sun, and marching ten miles with a 55-pound backpack. The Charlie Company officers worked hard to uphold their reputation as the toughest company, and my entire body ached to go home every day. Although each day seemed more grueling, I was surprised by how rewarding it felt to meet such a mentally and physically demanding challenge. The sense of accomplishment that I felt after three months of basic training was second to none.
Perhaps one of the most rewarding aspects of my time with Charlie Company was the friendship that developed among the eleven new recruits who shared a room with me. At first, I wondered how we would get along, given our divergent backgrounds. My own status as an honors student from overs
--> eas set me apart from the local polytechnic students and the poorly educated young men with whom I lived. As time went by, however, the camaraderie among the twelve of us grew into something that I have yet to experience again. Regardless of race, education, or religion, each recruit pushed the others to try harder, which in turn completely redefined our physical and mental limits. Knowing that eleven other people depended on me just as much as I depended on them made me understand the importance of teamwork.
After the monumental fifteen-mile march that marked the end of my military training, I was no longer the pampered teenager that I once was. My former lack of urgency, occasional tantrums, and childish outlook all dissipated after three months on the island of Pulau Tekong. Successfully completing the most challenging endeavor of my life has convinced me that I can accomplish anything. Now, I face challenges and hardships head-on; backing out will never again be an option.
Many of my friends who did not have to go through military service scoffed at the idea of postponing university for what they saw as a waste of time. I view it in a different light. For me, my time in the military was a golden opportunity that allowed me to discover the absolute limits of what I can achieve. Without a doubt, the basic training that began my military service was "the dawn of a new era" for me.
基础训练
[对一次你曾经有过的经历，达到的成就，冒险或者你曾面临的一次道德上的抉择进行评价，并说说它对你的影响。]
飞机渡运处的对讲机里嗡嗡的传出一个响亮的声音：“可以降落了。”从飞机上下来，我惊恐的看着周围无数张陌生的脸，心想他们都要遭受着同样的命运：参加新加坡的基本军事训练营。年轻些的时候，看着那些比我大一些的朋友为参加三个月的训练离开的时候我总是会笑。然而我很快意识到我两年兵役的前三个月可不是什么能笑的出来的事。（Ｉ）
我刚踏上Pulau Tekong这个阳光明媚的小岛----我的新家就想到了Tony Blair的一句名言“这是新时代的黎明！”一想到我的人生将出现一次重大的转折，我就被一种恐惧笼罩着。决定好充分利用这个环境之后，我按顺序来到礼堂报到，这就是我争使我正式参军的地方。（Ⅱ）
我被分到了Charlie连队，作为岛上两个营地中最严酷的一个连队，Charlie连队特别出名。但是刚开始的两周并没有我想象得那么恐怖。我花了几天的时间来进行足部训练和强化训练。在那几天平静的日子里，我常常奇怪我之前怎么会对基础训练那么的恐惧呢。很快，我找到了答案。（Ⅲ）
接下来的一周，我每天临晨三点北叫醒集合，做上几百个俯卧撑，然后在骄阳下进行几个小时的操练，之后还要背着55磅的背包行军。Charlie连队的军官们极力维护着他们“最严厉连队”的荣誉，而我每天都要带着浑身的酸痛回家。（Ⅳ）
尽管每天都比前一天让人精疲力竭，但是让我感到神奇的是：这种对生理和心理的双重极限挑战叫我如此受益。三个月的基础训练结束时我的那种成就感是别人无法体会的。（Ⅴ）
在Charlie连队，让我受益最深的就是从11个和我同室的新兵那得到的友谊。开始我还担心有着不同背景的我们该如何相处。我自己的身份----一个海外的乖学生，将我和其他同室的工艺专科学校的学生、没有接受过什么教育的青年分割开来。然而，一段时间过去了，我们之间建立起了我多年之后一直没有再遇到的同志般的友谊。不论种族、教育背景、宗教，每个人都激励着彼此去努力尝试，我们的身体和心灵都在不断的成长。了解到十一个朋友都依赖着我，就像我依赖着他们一样，我学到了团队合作的重要性。（Ⅵ）
一个纪念性的行军之后，我结束了我的训练生活。我已不是以前那个稚嫩的少年了。以前那个缺少坚持、老发脾气、眼界狭窄的我在Pulau Tekong三个月的军训生活之后消失了。（Ⅶ）
成功的战胜了生活中的很多问题之后，我觉得没有什么事是无法完成的。现在，遇上了困难与挑战我会迎面赶上，退缩永远不会使我的选择。（Ⅷ）
我的很多不必服兵役的朋友觉得为了服兵役推迟上大学是件十分好笑的事情，但是我并不这么认为，在军队的日子对于我来说是一段宝贵的经历。它让我更清楚自己能力的极限。毫无疑问，服兵役前的基础训练才是我的“新时代的黎明”！（Ⅸ）
Basic training

[to a time you had experience to achievement, adventure or you have faced a moral choice to evaluate, and about its impact on you.]

The plane ferrying in the intercom hum of issues a loud voice: "can land." From the aircraft down, I frightened watched around a great number of strange face, thinking that they will suffer from the same fate: the basic military training camp in Singapore. The younger, look at those ratio I big some friends to take part in three months of training to leave when I always laugh. However I soon realized I two years of military service in the first three months of what is not able to laugh out. (I)

Pulau Tekong I just on the sunny island-my new home would think of Tony Blair a famous saying of "this is the dawn of a new era!" The thought of my life will be a major turning point, I'll be a shrouded with fear. Decided to make full use of the environment is good, then I came to the auditorium in order to report for duty, this is I dispute that I officially join the army place. (Ⅱ)

I was assigned to Charlie company, as the island two camp in the harshest a company, Charlie company especially famous. But the first two weeks and I don't think so horrible. I spent several days to foot training and intensive training. In the days of calm days, I often strange before I how could the basic training so fear? Soon, I found the answer. (Ⅲ)#p#分页标题#e#

The next week, and every day I wake up at three o 'clock in the morning the set, do hundreds of push-ups, and then in the hot sun for several hours of practice, even after carrying 55 pounds backpack march. Charlie company officers tried to maintain their "the most severe company" honor, and every day I want to take the pain and go home. (Ⅳ)

Although every day than the previous day exhausting, but let me feel the magic is: this for physical and mental double limit challenge that I so benefit. Three months of the end of my basic training the satisfaction of seeing that people can experience. (Ⅴ)

In Charlie company, let me benefit from the deepest is 11 and I inmates from the new recruits that get friendship. Start and I was worried about the different backgrounds of we how to get along with. My own identity-a overseas good students, will I and other inmates technology college students, not received what education of young apart. However, for a period of time in the past, we established between after many years I haven't met the comrade friendship. Regardless of race, education background, religious, everyone encourage each other to try to, the body and spirit are in constant growth. To understand the eleven friends rely on me, like I rely on them, I learned the importance of teamwork. (Ⅵ)

A memorial march after, I end my training life. I have not previously that young young. Before the lack of persistence, old lost his temper, narrow my vision in Pulau Tekong three months of military training life after disappeared. (Ⅶ)

The success of the victory over the life of the many problems after, I think nothing is simply can't do. Now, met with difficulties and challenges I'll keep abreast, shrink back never my choice. (Ⅷ)

I don't have a lot of friends feel that in order to military service for military service in university is a delay is very funny things, but I don't think so, in the day of the army for me is a precious experience. It makes me more clearly the limits of our abilities. There is no doubt that, before the military service of basic training is my "new age dawn"! (Ⅸ)